(This first sentence says nothing eye-catching about the woman and is very bland, and boring). (still, nothing thought provoking or attractive) I am very spontaneous and I love the outdoors, watching movies, dancing, and traveling. (Finally something somewhat interesting that she says about herself).
(Another cliché statement that is being used by thousands of other women) A great date can be staying at home with a movie and popcorn, or a night on the town. I made myself a promise a few years ago to take a vacation somewhere new, out of state, every year. Well, that is a little about me if you are interested say hello and we will chat. ” *********************** This profile gets a higher grade because it reflects on the writer’s character and her personality.
If your profile’s first line doesn’t have a hook, someone may not even bother reading the rest. You can start with, “I once…” and add an interesting story or share a fun fact about yourself to entice the reader to read on.
“I love doing creative things (I sew and knit) as well as learning about life and people.
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“100% Italian, fun loving, affectionate young lady who knows what it takes to make a relationship work.
It’s vital that you use this space to create a profile header message that commands attention – something clever, funny, or philosophical that will make a person want to click on your profile and read it.
SEE ALSO: Online Dating Profile Advice Video There are several elements that go into creating a profile that people will want to click to read.
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